Feedback

Overall, as a group, we are happy with our feedback. The four groups that watched our rough cut gave us level 3 as it was unfinished, but all said in the video how they understand because it is i-stop-motion that it takes more time and work put into it.
Have they shot material appropriate for a music video?
All groups said yes to this question, so the idea as a whole has been successful in accompanying the song.
Has close attention been paid to mise en scene ?
Again, all groups said yes to this question as well. Because i took the photographs, i wanted her to be in a dark colour so she stood out from all backgrounds and this seemed to work well, despite everything happening around her you still follow her walking through the shot as well. Although from the video, they said we couldve cut the pictures out a bit better, which i agree with but there was just so many.
Is there controlled use of the camera?
The groups said yes to the this, as we made sure the camera was in the same place it was before we resumed filming and although in the same angle throughout the filming process, we managed to et different angles in there as well.
Is the editing effective at constructing a linear or non-linear meaning?
On this question two groups said no and two groups said yes. I think to undersrand the meaning of the video you have to listen to the lyrics of the song quite closely and maybe the other groups were not doing that, but we still tried to make it interesting to watch.
Is there appropriate use of transitions and other effects?
All groups said yes to this question.
Does the pace of editing work well with the pace of the song?
again all groups said yes to this question and a comment was made saying 'it fits well with the song'.
Is the video effective at communicating a star persona?
3 groups said no and one said sort off. This is one we have tried to fix whilst finishing filming by having more close ups of the girl with more facial expressions so the audience identifies more with her. Not only this but this makes it even more important for the digipack to demonstrate this.

i think this feeback is very postive, considering that we hadnt finished filming at the time this was shown that was the main thing said, that it needs to finished. but its good to hear people sayy oh wow that looks good, as we have put a lot of hard work in to it.