Directors Commentary script

This is the script for our directors commentary, which is going to be a voice over our video, with all of the clips of the feedback involved as well.

WE MADE THE COLOURS MORE VIBRANT AND ADDED THE CUT OUT STRIPS TO MAKE IT MORE INTERESTING TO LOOK AT.

We could've taken more time here to cut the pictures as its is on a white background you can see the mistakes easier.

In the first chorus you can see some shadows in the top of the screen, although none of the people  have picked up on it, we as a group have and we feels it spoils the effect.

Again whilst filming we found it hard to get the light the same every single time, creating colour errors that we didn't want and because it was so noticeable although colour corrector helped you can still see it.

As we used i-stop-motion it took a while to film, and it was hard to keep the consistency with no shadows and hands in the corner and here is where you can see it.

For us personally, the brightness is too much here but we know on a real screen it will look professional rather than dull, but creates a glow almost like our ancillary products.

We wanted to finish the video off on a positive note.